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First real submission of the year! w00t!

I don't know how many people are going to notice the way I draw faces look a little bit different than normal. I also added some more shading to Minako for more depth. I realized I needed a bit of a change, and this is definitely a start. But I wanna know what you guys think! Do you like this newer style, or do you prefer the old way? I'm curious to what you guys think of the change ^^

Happy New Year everyone! <3
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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Great work with the anatomy! The pose is cute and original, but suits Minako.

My critique is that her eyes are a bit too low on her face. Bump them up so that the bottom of her eyes is about where her ears begin and move the one closest to us inward towards her nose just a tiny bit.

The light source on her arm is a bit off. I'd not shade quite so close to her elbow, as that's where her arm is closest to the light.

You could add a bit of depth to her hair by making the bangs a little fluffier, but that's only a preference thing.

Really nice work <3