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I've known you since I can even remember..
Remember when we never need each other?
Best of friends...like a brother and sister.
Ever understand what our parents meant when we were really two of a kind?
Looking back on it all, I do now...

Some things never change;
We share our laughs, our tears;
There for each other until the end.
But now we're older, feelings alter and it just won't go away;
Afraid of reaction, I stay quiet;
Constantly wondering how I fell in love with you.

Elementary school was probably one of the best times we've had;
You and I playing together as always;
Never leaving each other's side;
Never having to worry about anything;
Now things have changed.

Some things never change;
We share our laughs, our tears;
There for each other until the end.
But now we're older, feelings alter and it just won't go away;
Afraid of reaction, I stay quiet;
Constantly wondering how I fell in love with you.

Now we'rea bit older, and emotions begin to take their toll;
Making the days harder to get through.
You look at me, and I look away;
Hesitant...and afraid; wanting to ask:
"Do you love me?"

Some things never change;
We share our laughs, our tears;
There for each other until the end.
But now we're older, feelings alter and it just won't go away;
Afraid of reaction, I stay quiet;
Constantly wondering how I fell in love with you.

Finally the feelings are released!
Did I do the right thing?
Will you reject me?
I stand there in fear of what your answer might be.
You walk over to me and gave me a gentle smile.

Some things never change;
We share our laughs, our tears;
There for each other until the end.
But now we're older, feelings alter and it just won't go away;
Afraid of reaction, I stay quiet;
Constantly wondering how I fell in love with you.

You wrap you arms around me;
Comforting me with your warmth.
You then lightly brush your lips against mine;
I could just feel melting right there;
Knowing words aren't the only way to express your feelings

Some things never change;
We share our laughs, our tears;
There for each other until the end.
But now we're older, feelings alter and it just won't go away;
Afraid of reaction, I stay quiet;
Now glad that I fell in love with you.
:icondawnrie:
Um...I really am not a good poet of ANY kind..this was supposed to be some kind of assignment for Creative writing and she said it had to be something emotional that is in ur life, and it had to be in the form of a ballad...I am DEFINITELY not a poet..@__@ But some of you might understand if you know me personally what this is about....so...um...ya...enjoy? *skids off*
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:iconemerald-fire:
I love your poem!
I like how to wrote it too. =]
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:icondallakro:
i really like how u write u.u hope once again i can fell that thing u felt u.u its really... well ill go bye :music: :+fav:
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~ashayourangel Oct 3, 2003  Hobbyist Writer
oh boy do I know how this feels lol
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*runeechan Oct 2, 2003  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this is very pretty. ;-;

hey...what you get as a grade for this. its really prettyful. :love:
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*Dawnrie Oct 2, 2003  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I just turned it into today...I won't know until monday since I'm gonna be gone tomorrow on an art field trip ^^;;
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:iconrage69:
Wow, you´re very good, it´s an exellent poem yes siiiir, i like it. :)
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*sakura02 Oct 1, 2003  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wow beautiful poetry *sniffle* that was absolutely amazing!!! :clap: BRAVO
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:iconshift-null:
This really brought a tear to my eye. You may not know it but you are a poet, and a damn good one at that ^_^
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~Nashida Oct 1, 2003  Hobbyist Digital Artist
And you said you were bad at poetry...That's good! >^-^<
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*Dawnrie Oct 1, 2003  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I AM bad at poetry..no one belives me! T-T

Dawnie-chan
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